tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7666125513958045866.post3747919064318721074..comments2023-10-30T20:10:56.806-07:00Comments on Jessica Knauss, Famous Author: Six Sentence Sunday WeddingJessica Knausshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07049731983377756203noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7666125513958045866.post-85434898243542776942011-06-21T08:35:51.044-07:002011-06-21T08:35:51.044-07:00Good physical descriptors of nervousness! Really h...Good physical descriptors of nervousness! Really heightens the stress of the situation.1000th.monkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16835988128285459745noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7666125513958045866.post-57093795923669722752011-06-20T15:26:03.221-07:002011-06-20T15:26:03.221-07:00Loved this snippet, really enjoyed the whole scene...Loved this snippet, really enjoyed the whole scene... poor love, she seems really nervous! xx fab six!JoAnne Kenrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15234275353277804224noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7666125513958045866.post-69895233290972165082011-06-20T03:29:24.152-07:002011-06-20T03:29:24.152-07:00Poor Lambra. I liked the line about the birds too,...Poor Lambra. I liked the line about the birds too, and love the bit you posted about your research.Pippa Jayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15146591827060731958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7666125513958045866.post-64709608996480535792011-06-20T03:21:39.753-07:002011-06-20T03:21:39.753-07:00Great description, I especially like "much me...Great description, I especially like "much meaning for Lambra as the twittering of birds". And I really feel her panic. Great 6!Roberta Walkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10806214081554970161noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7666125513958045866.post-80483152498360478442011-06-20T01:47:00.360-07:002011-06-20T01:47:00.360-07:00Interesting. I was ground in the setting and coul...Interesting. I was ground in the setting and could feel her turbulent emotions! Well done!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02422942404526720212noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7666125513958045866.post-47297972595088772292011-06-19T20:05:28.646-07:002011-06-19T20:05:28.646-07:00She's got wedding jitters for sure! Great six!...She's got wedding jitters for sure! Great six!Elisa Danehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10681641110829000372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7666125513958045866.post-9235289036154735422011-06-19T15:48:56.340-07:002011-06-19T15:48:56.340-07:00Terrific six. You can feel her anxiety and I love ...Terrific six. You can feel her anxiety and I love the history. Patricia Preston.Patricia Prestonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04538067779006621088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7666125513958045866.post-78945775962618655572011-06-19T15:13:17.529-07:002011-06-19T15:13:17.529-07:00I guess they didn't have Valium then, either? ...I guess they didn't have Valium then, either? Great job of showing her anxiety and nerves.Taryn Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11130206764352777367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7666125513958045866.post-89650926176476182562011-06-19T14:43:57.992-07:002011-06-19T14:43:57.992-07:00sigh, very romantic. Nice!sigh, very romantic. Nice!Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11457235963917206588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7666125513958045866.post-55676001445146204292011-06-19T14:39:50.972-07:002011-06-19T14:39:50.972-07:00PS: Thanks for posting your comment on my Six too!...PS: Thanks for posting your comment on my Six too!Sandra Nachlingerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16906884446237370105noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7666125513958045866.post-29702874406570497962011-06-19T14:39:19.302-07:002011-06-19T14:39:19.302-07:00You must have done tons of research, and it shows ...You must have done tons of research, and it shows in your detail. Really interesting. I can definitely feel Lambra's unease.Sandra Nachlingerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16906884446237370105noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7666125513958045866.post-89211103005615686462011-06-19T13:11:51.123-07:002011-06-19T13:11:51.123-07:00Poor Lambra! Doesn't sound like she's too ...Poor Lambra! Doesn't sound like she's too happy to be received as his.Sonyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01351929216915547602noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7666125513958045866.post-6891164207877533352011-06-19T12:50:48.252-07:002011-06-19T12:50:48.252-07:00I'd be kinda freaked out too... Great six!I'd be kinda freaked out too... Great six!lexcadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18094072290983267178noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7666125513958045866.post-11446943322672128232011-06-19T12:29:28.100-07:002011-06-19T12:29:28.100-07:00Yes, I'm weith Eleri, that line really grabbed...Yes, I'm weith Eleri, that line really grabbed me...the ownership that the words imply. No wonder she's frightened. Great six.Gem Sivadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01233835029255570402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7666125513958045866.post-87073083855858233562011-06-19T12:24:54.277-07:002011-06-19T12:24:54.277-07:00Great description of her nerves. I really like the...Great description of her nerves. I really like the way you phrased the "I receive you as mine..."Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12742618211008888625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7666125513958045866.post-80003588821140394672011-06-19T12:08:25.676-07:002011-06-19T12:08:25.676-07:00I don't know... the Wife of Bath had five &quo...I don't know... the Wife of Bath had five "husbands at church door." So getting closer to the sanctuary, but not in it yet. When they moved it inside probably varies by location. I don't think marriage was a sacrament until the Council of Trent or something like that -- too late for me to have a firm handle on it. Okay I'll stop being medieval geeky now. Thanks for stopping by, Barb!Jessica Knausshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07049731983377756203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7666125513958045866.post-91526831730622833702011-06-19T11:48:57.169-07:002011-06-19T11:48:57.169-07:00In the 12th century it was still outside the churc...In the 12th century it was still outside the church... I think they moved inside in the 13th! :-) <br />Great snippet!<br />(said the writer who is working on a 12th century historical she'll eventually post for SSS)<br />BarbAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7666125513958045866.post-9214710559999963462011-06-19T09:58:44.863-07:002011-06-19T09:58:44.863-07:00she's nervous. I think she should run :-)she's nervous. I think she should run :-)Sandra Sookoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08864799097052526762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7666125513958045866.post-63864628127651289792011-06-19T09:42:29.506-07:002011-06-19T09:42:29.506-07:00Love the way you describe the nervousness of her.Love the way you describe the nervousness of her.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7666125513958045866.post-60964581148329872182011-06-19T09:41:44.550-07:002011-06-19T09:41:44.550-07:00I hope, though nervous, she will make it through t...I hope, though nervous, she will make it through the ceremony without passing out. That might not reflect well about her husband! Great six.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7666125513958045866.post-43824518913370562742011-06-19T08:11:03.511-07:002011-06-19T08:11:03.511-07:00She sounds totally overwhelmed in a daunting momen...She sounds totally overwhelmed in a daunting moment! Well done!Zee Monodeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03709226882459365836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7666125513958045866.post-17449996358817363372011-06-19T07:14:54.956-07:002011-06-19T07:14:54.956-07:00Excellent description. I agree that she sounds ver...Excellent description. I agree that she sounds very overwhelmed.Joanne Stewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17708364499624604625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7666125513958045866.post-72706330134464448792011-06-19T06:54:51.053-07:002011-06-19T06:54:51.053-07:00Wonderful six, I was holding my breath for her. Th...Wonderful six, I was holding my breath for her. Thank you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7666125513958045866.post-64949413540424011082011-06-19T06:38:40.052-07:002011-06-19T06:38:40.052-07:00She sure is jittery - ah - did they still celebrat...She sure is jittery - ah - did they still celebrate the first night of marriage? She sounds too frightened to perform....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7666125513958045866.post-48060732597750817192011-06-19T06:19:00.627-07:002011-06-19T06:19:00.627-07:00Love this six! Very realistic sense of her nervous...Love this six! Very realistic sense of her nervousness. Pulled me right in.Sarah Grimmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03737049126767567901noreply@blogger.com