tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7666125513958045866.post8897550334971795459..comments2023-10-30T20:10:56.806-07:00Comments on Jessica Knauss, Famous Author: Sweet Sample of My Accidental NovelJessica Knausshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07049731983377756203noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7666125513958045866.post-70161768693029243342011-10-02T06:50:06.078-07:002011-10-02T06:50:06.078-07:00Interesting sample :-) I liked it.Interesting sample :-) I liked it.Sam Crescenthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04719352157782391851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7666125513958045866.post-85418676161203006082011-10-01T16:16:47.936-07:002011-10-01T16:16:47.936-07:00I enjoyed your sample. Emily did seem to be a litt...I enjoyed your sample. Emily did seem to be a little bit cold to me because she seemed more concerned about the melodrama surrounding Carlos's death than the actual death itself! But since this is just an excerpt, it's hard to know exactly what went on beforehand. I definitely enjoyed your writing. It sounds like a terrific story.Sandra Nachlingerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16906884446237370105noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7666125513958045866.post-10069607929634204452011-10-01T14:40:24.279-07:002011-10-01T14:40:24.279-07:00I like this sample even if you keep the police off...I like this sample even if you keep the police officers the way they areAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7666125513958045866.post-56991423672508532492011-10-01T13:01:44.118-07:002011-10-01T13:01:44.118-07:00I like this sample and say use it for NaNoWriMo. I...I like this sample and say use it for NaNoWriMo. It's interesting but I see what you meant at the beginning when you introduced it. Some fine tuning and it should be what you want it to be.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7666125513958045866.post-48753517029105342032011-10-01T11:39:38.303-07:002011-10-01T11:39:38.303-07:00It reads well, but I can understand why your group...It reads well, but I can understand why your group think it needs change. If the cops refused then you'r crank up the tension in this scene, but then how would that relate to the rest of your story?Sherry Gloaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03143365764333974956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7666125513958045866.post-62014665503770161302011-10-01T06:12:27.906-07:002011-10-01T06:12:27.906-07:00This sounds pretty good to me. Good luck with NaN...This sounds pretty good to me. Good luck with NaNoWriMo!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com