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Sunday, June 26, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday Sail To Italy Again!

Sail To Italy and Sail From Italy are back and better than ever, with a spiffy new cover and in print from Açedrex Publishing!

I'm celebrating with six sentences from the beginning of the big blowup between Carlovita and Conchita in Sail From Italy. Conchita was Javier's girlfriend in a time long ago, and I think we all appreciate that Carlovita has to protect her marriage!

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Conchita went directly to the mirror and started adjusting herself. Carlovita slammed the door behind her as hard as she could, to show her purpose in a way the most idiotic could understand.
“All right, missy,” she said as she advanced on Conchita.
“What?” squeaked Conchita before Carlovita backed her up against the wall.
“What do you think you’re doing?”
      Conchita opened her mouth to reply, but Carlovita stuffed a piece of toilet paper in it. 

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The video finishes the scene in rather a more mellow manner.

And look up there on the left. I now have whole page of Sailing Italy excerpts for your enjoyment.

Thanks so much to everyone for the comments last week. I'm so thrilled my work-in-progress The Seven Noble Knights of Lara seems to interest you!

Check out the other sets of six here!

31 comments:

  1. Definitely some tension there. Nice six!

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  2. Oh...I don't think these ladies are friends. lol!

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  3. Hmm, it is hard to reply with toilet paper stuffed in your mouth. Lol! Great six!

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  4. Toilet paper? lol. She means business.

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  5. Cat fight! Love the way they are differentiated, just by Conchita squeaking! Great six!

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  6. Fantastic Six. I love "in a way the most idiotic could understand" followed by toilet paper stuffing. Thank you.

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  7. LOL. Love the toilet paper. Well done!

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  8. Toilet paper is the perfect conversation stopper. What an original, clever idea! I'm loving this.

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  9. LMAO...oh the tension! hehe and loved the little video clip xx

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  10. Well that stopped that conversation quickly. Great fight scene female style.

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  11. Toilet paper? That's serious. I wouldn't want to be in that room. :)

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  12. Me thinks there is going to be a fight! Great scene.

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  13. Love the last line. Toilet paper, great way to shut someone up

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  14. ME-OW! The claws are out great six!

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  15. I don't think I'd want her mad at me!

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  16. Oh yuck! LOL! Wouldn't want to get on her bad side!

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  17. lol Toilet paper? Oh now I'm dying to know. Great six.

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  18. Well, I was not expecting a piece of toilet paper to be stuffed in her mouth! Great snippet!

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  19. LOL @ the TP. That's awesome. Great six, Jessica!

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  20. not sure about the toilet paper lol, interesting six :-)

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  21. Ha! To catch any sh*t coming from her mouth? Fun six.

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  22. Cat fight! The toilet paper was a nice touch. ;)

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  23. My very first cat fight with toilet paper involved. Nice touch!

    ~Xakara
    A Way To A Dragon's Heart 6SS

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  24. What a bitch! Great six :)

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  25. I do believe these two don't like one another.

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  26. Whoa, intense six! Showdown in the lady's room!

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  27. Bleurgh, toilet paper in the mouth!

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  28. That wasn't very nice! I hope the TP was not used! LOL. Great show of tension and the buildup of what's to come!

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