Because of the popularity of my YA Sail From Italy last week, this week, you get more! Here, we see (married) Javier meet the person who gets so scarily confronted in the video excerpt at bottom. Enjoy!
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Javier gasped when a stunningly beautiful woman emerged from the bushes and turned in to the yard. Her presence improved the appearance of the already gorgeous courtyard. She glowed with an aura that followed her, step by gliding step. Javier sprang up and shouted, “Conchita!”
The lady looked over and exclaimed, “Why, Javier! It’s you.”
“Oh, but who else?” smiled Javier. * * *
Here's the video I mentioned.
Intriguing - is he dreaming? Nice snippet.
ReplyDeleteI Agree...This does have the feel of a dream. Nice 6
ReplyDeleteI suddenly have an urge to visit Italy!
ReplyDeleteI love that last line!
ReplyDeleteCute meet!
ReplyDeleteGreat six!
ReplyDeleteGreat snippet!
ReplyDeleteGreat six and the video is cute.
ReplyDeletelove! so cute!
ReplyDeleteItaly never sounded so alluring before. Great six, Jessica.
ReplyDeletehmm, very interesting. Is she an illusion?
ReplyDeleteDelightful six, oh famous one.
ReplyDeleteDoes have that sunlight-washed vacation atmosphere. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteWho else could it be? Hmmm.
ReplyDeleteJoyce
http://joycelansky.blogspot.com
Who else, indeed! LOL. Great job.
ReplyDeleteInteresting set up. Curious to where you go with this. It's clear these two share SOMETHING.
ReplyDeleteLove that last line. Very intriguing!
ReplyDeleteGood excerpt!
ReplyDeleteBest,
Allure Van Sanz
I hope his wife gets Lady of Spain out of the picture. Good six. :o)
ReplyDeleteLots of conflict here--the video gives us even more. Javier seems pretty cozy with Conchita for a married man--suspenseful six!
ReplyDeleteThis has a surreal, dreamlike quality, and I love the last line!
ReplyDeleteSo what was she doing in the bushes?!
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