Today, still imbued with Halloween spirit, I thought I'd remind everyone about the first paranormal story I ever published. You can read the whole thing here.
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We were at the gates of the cemetery. The moon was shining down on us, illuminating our fear and superstition. I peered past the tall monuments to important families, looking for the place where Edelmira had been laid to rest that morning. “It’s that way,” I said. “Let’s go.” But none of us moved.
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The last line gave me the chills. Great six!
ReplyDeleteDefinitely spooky.
ReplyDeleteI wonder where they're going? Sounds like this could be trouble :)
ReplyDeleteHey Jessica! Love the six! It's great reading you, my friend! Hope you have a fantastic Sunday!
ReplyDeleteSpooky or quite sad? You hooked me.
ReplyDeleteEww...I've got chills. Great Six
ReplyDeletenice six
ReplyDeleteLove 'illuminating our fear and superstition'!
ReplyDeleteEerie. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeletePerfect Halloweeny six!
ReplyDeleteGreat atmospheric descripton! Love spooky!
ReplyDeleteAwesome atmosphere. Well done!
ReplyDeleteGreat atmosphere--nice job!
ReplyDeleteEdelmira is a great name.
ReplyDeleteThat last line was a great ending hook...nicely done!
ReplyDeletespooky six, Jessica xxx
ReplyDeleteOh, nice and creepy!
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