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With dutiful nods, six brothers each knelt at Ruy Blásquez’s feet and kissed his hand. Doña Sancha said, “Gonzalo will do it some other time since if he kneels now, he may not be able to get back up.” She dabbed at his head wounds with her maid’s handkerchief, although they were beginning to stop bleeding at last.
And with this, the men seemed well pleased. Sancha looked at Lambra, who refused to look back at her, but crouched down and began collecting Álvar Sánchez’s gore-covered teeth in an improvised pouch of her skirt. The blood and soil seeped through the yellow silk, spattered sinister flowerlets on Álvar’s tunic and sank deep into the earth.
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I expect that's sufficiently creepy or gory for Halloween tomorrow. Thanks so much for stopping by. I so appreciate your comments! Don't miss out on the other excerpts here.
Poor girl, left to pick up the gruesome teeth.
ReplyDeleteSo visual and what a mess. Good work.
ReplyDeleteVivid six! Great pick for Halloween :)
ReplyDeleteWonderful six sentences! I wish you a ton of sales with your books! Happy Sunday and Happy Halloween!
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Great ending to a wild wedding! When does this come out (or is it out now)? Excellent six to end it on.
ReplyDelete"crouched down and began collecting Álvar Sánchez’s gore-covered teeth in an improvised pouch of her skirt" --- Niiice.
ReplyDeleteAwesome. Love the contrast between their civility now, the wedding finery and all the gore.
ReplyDeleteCollecting her teeth in a pouch? Ick! In a good way, of course.
ReplyDeleteTeeth? In a pouch? Nice! LOL
ReplyDeleteVivid as always. Well done!
ReplyDeleteSo Vivid! Nice job!
ReplyDeleteThose teeth still creep me out! Going to miss reading this on Sundays. Always a surprise. :)
ReplyDeleteLoved the spattered sinister flowerets! All so very visual and definitely Halloween appropriate!
ReplyDeleteEWWWWWW! Well played.
ReplyDeleteSo cool for Halloween!
ReplyDeleteGreat writing! and I love the work you've done on the blog. Looks great! Happy Halloween.
ReplyDeleteEwww...teeth! :-)
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