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Sunday, May 8, 2011

Happy Six Sentence Mother's Day!


Many thanks to everyone who left comments last week! I appreciate it so much! Here's the hub of activity.

In honor of Mother's Day today, I asked my beautiful mother to choose her favorite thing I'd ever written, and I would select six sentences from that. I was surprised that she selected a poem of mine from my long-forgotten poetry volume, Dusk Before Dawn. The poem is based on the painting pictured above, which hangs in the Museum of Fine Arts, Boston. Poetry seems a bit unorthodox for Six Sentence Sunday, but I don't see anything that prohibits it, so, here's to you, Mum!


The Painter’s Honeymoon

Lord Frederick Leighton understood
that loves comes in soft hues of gold;
that its lines are warm and comforting,
smooth and flowing as the folds of an olive-toned gown
which, with its velvet, covers layers of full, bountiful petticoats,
completely hidden.
He recognized that love blooms like golden pears outside the window,
blossoms like the glow in the young bride’s face.

As he tenderly holds his sketching pencil,
so too does he hold her hand
as she inclines toward his smooth face,
her eyes lowered.

The wide drawing desk shades and obscures
the red passion of his stockings. 


Affordable and lovely, Dusk Before Dawn is available from Amazon and by request at most independent booksellers and libraries. Mothers agree, it's great!

30 comments:

  1. So nice to let your Mom do that! Great 6~

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  2. "Love blooms like golden pears outside the window..."

    Exquisite imagery, Jessica!

    Lovely six.

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  3. Wow, I'm not usually one for poetry but that was lovely!

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  4. Love your six this week! Great job!

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  5. A lovely six that your mom selected. Thank you for sharing.

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  6. Lovely. What a nice tribute.

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  7. Wow, what a great six for the day!

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  8. Aww, how lovely that you asked your mum to do that...and she made a great choice. Beautiful words xx

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  9. That's beautiful. And what a grand idea, asking your mother for her favorite work.

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  10. What a lovely poem, painting and relationship with your wonderful mom! All things to cherish, and celebrate!

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  11. Gorgeous imagery. Happy mother's day to you and your mom!

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  12. Just beautiful! Your mother is a very wise woman. Happy Mother's Day to all!

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  13. Very nice. Lovely, in fact. Your mother chose well.

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  14. A beautiful switch for Mom's day! Sweet idea.

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  15. Beautiful! And sweet that your mom picked it!

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  16. So cool that you asked your mom to pick. Hope everyone had a happy mothers day!

    Beautiful piece, too. I love imagery throughout and the pacing. Sounded almost bard-like, if that makes any sense... Great lines!

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  17. Very lovely. Romance at its best.

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  18. Wow. It was nice to step outside the normal six sentences and into something beautifully poetic and refreshing.

    Thank you!

    And thank you for stopping by my blog and leaving a comment. I guess I hiccuped and my sign-up didn't go through, but you still found me and I appreciate it!

    Best,
    Allure

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  19. Sweet, and poetry makes a nice change.

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  20. Absolutely beautiful! Happy Mother's Day!

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