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Sunday, May 1, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday: Sail From Italy II

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Because of the popularity of my YA Sail From Italy last week, this week, you get more! Here, we see (married) Javier meet the person who gets so scarily confronted in the video excerpt at bottom. Enjoy!


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Javier gasped when a stunningly beautiful woman emerged from the bushes and turned in to the yard. Her presence improved the appearance of the already gorgeous courtyard. She glowed with an aura that followed her, step by gliding step. Javier sprang up and shouted, “Conchita!”
The lady looked over and exclaimed, “Why, Javier! It’s you.”
       “Oh, but who else?” smiled Javier. 


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Here's the video I mentioned.

The wildly popular Sailing Italy series is available for very little money on Kindle.

22 comments:

  1. Intriguing - is he dreaming? Nice snippet.

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  2. I Agree...This does have the feel of a dream. Nice 6

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  3. I suddenly have an urge to visit Italy!

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  4. Great six and the video is cute.

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  5. Italy never sounded so alluring before. Great six, Jessica.

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  6. hmm, very interesting. Is she an illusion?

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  7. Delightful six, oh famous one.

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  8. Does have that sunlight-washed vacation atmosphere. Lovely.

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  9. Who else could it be? Hmmm.

    Joyce
    http://joycelansky.blogspot.com

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  10. Who else, indeed! LOL. Great job.

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  11. Interesting set up. Curious to where you go with this. It's clear these two share SOMETHING.

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  12. Love that last line. Very intriguing!

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  13. Good excerpt!

    Best,
    Allure Van Sanz

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  14. I hope his wife gets Lady of Spain out of the picture. Good six. :o)

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  15. Lots of conflict here--the video gives us even more. Javier seems pretty cozy with Conchita for a married man--suspenseful six!

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  16. This has a surreal, dreamlike quality, and I love the last line!

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  17. So what was she doing in the bushes?!

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