The Arlanzón River in Burgos in 2005. |
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“My sons are outside with my husband, waiting to meet you!” doña Sancha beamed.
Justa, Gotina, and all the other servants followed Sancha and the count outside to find a concentration of masculinity so intense, Justa felt it wash over her like the waves of the Cantabrian Sea. Nine men, each with at least one sword tied to his belt, and seven with raven-black hair shining in the sunlight, laughed and talked amongst themselves, producing a resonant rumble in the women’s ears.
Count García said playfully, “Hey, Gonzalico, come and meet your future relative, and bring those sons of yours. Ah, there they are! I would never have known, since they’re so quiet.”
Justa looked at doña Sancha and tried to imagine all those well-formed men coming out of her somehow.
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Nice. Nine versions of Enrique Iglesias? Can't be bad.
ReplyDeleteWhat a striking visual you show of all these guys, and their mother. Love your voice, and how the words flow. This promises to be a great read.
ReplyDeleteLOL I think I'd be trying to imagine that, too. Great six!
ReplyDeleteYum! 9 Latin hotties!!
ReplyDeleteLoved this "concentration of masculinity" :) Wonderful teaser.
ReplyDeleteOh, god, I love that imagery! 9 men! Does that mean 8 left over for us?
ReplyDeleteI concur. Terrific image of all the men lined up. It's cinematic. :) Nice job!
ReplyDelete'concentration of masculinity'- you can almost feel the testosterone. Wonderful six
ReplyDeleteExcellent setup for the scene. You could feel all that quiet masculinity
ReplyDeleteWow, that sounds like she just walked into a dream come true!
ReplyDeleteGood lord.... All those men... Swords... Rumbling... Very nice six!
ReplyDeletenow that's a party!
ReplyDeleteSounds like she's impressed! :D Nice six.
ReplyDeleteVery metaphoric with swords and rumbling and a "concentration of masculinity".
ReplyDeleteGreat historical voice in these six!
I love the way you describe a concentration of masculinity. hmmmmm.
ReplyDeleteThe waves of masculinity, the diminutive mother (at least, that's the sense I get with all the strapping sons surrounding her), you've painted a perfect picture here.
ReplyDeleteI guess it's good breeding. Nice six! :)
ReplyDeleteLove it. I hope to read more!!!
ReplyDelete"raven-black hair" is a bit cliche, but you've got something really good here. Great job! :-)
ReplyDeleteBarb
Great visual picture.
ReplyDeleteWhat a fun scene! Enjoyed your six!
ReplyDeleteOh yes, I love "concentrating" on masculinity, too! :)
ReplyDeleteWhat a sight that would be! Yummy, Jessica. :)
ReplyDeleteGotta love the testosterone atmosphere combined with the suggestion that their petite mother commands them with complete confidence! Fun six!
ReplyDeleteLol, does she have to pick one? :-P
ReplyDeleteGreat six!
ReplyDeleteLori
Interesting visual. I look forward to seeing what you do with this. :o)
ReplyDeleteLove the "concentration of masculinity" line!
ReplyDeleteLove the visual you give us here!
ReplyDeleteGreat six!
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