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Swiveling once again, tottering precariously, he continued, "But Uncle, for the sake of your love for me, I beg you not to hit me again, because you couldn't suffer the consequences."
Ruy Blásquez raised his lance once again, over doña Sancha's protests, but this time Gonzalo was able to dodge the blow so that it hit his shoulder and did not cut him, but broke in two. Taking advantage of Ruy Blásquez's surprise, Gonzalo seized the goshawk from his brother Suero's arm and, screaming with the bird at the slicing of its talons into his arm, forced it into his uncle's face. The bird struck out with its beak in indignation. Sancha cried, "Stop!" but before Suero intervened to coax the agitated hawk back onto his protected hand, Ruy Blásquez's nose had begun to bleed copiously.
At the sight of her husband's blood, doña Lambra began to look around her.
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Thank you for coming by and for commenting! I appreciate what you have to say very much, as these snippets have a lot more editing to go through. The other amazing snippets are to be found here.
This is the craziest wedding. Period. I love these sixes, though, Jessica. I'm thoroughly entertained and concerned for Sancha. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteWell, he warned him. Nice six!
ReplyDeleteVery intense. I got really into the moment and wished I could read more!
ReplyDeleteI don't know if I'd want to be at this wedding, lol. Fab snippet!
ReplyDeleteA nice Sunday morning smack-down with the uncle. I enjoyed it!
ReplyDeleteThe bloodletting has no end it seems!
ReplyDeleteVery vivid six! Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteOh - great imagery. I didn't want it to end!
ReplyDeleteWell it's certainly a wedding to remember. Very visual. Great six!
ReplyDeleteI keep on forgetting this is a wedding! Poor Lambra.
ReplyDeleteIt's like your painting with words, a fantastic scene, so vivid. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteI've been following this nutty, violent wedding all along with avid interest. So good. But I have to admit that this six was a little confusing for me. And the last sentence seemed a little week. At the sight of her husband's blood, I want Lambra to do more than begin to look around!
ReplyDeleteGosh! This is turning into one heck of a wedding! :)
ReplyDeleteThis is only my second week reading these snippets from the wedding, but I don't think I'm going to forget it any time soon.
ReplyDeleteCertainly this is the wedding from hell! Loved the use of the hawk as a weapon. Very nice touch. (Though one wonder why you would bring a hawk to a wedding! I guess it was for the games.) Another great six!
ReplyDeleteTaryn, they only allow six sentences, hon. Tune in next week for Lambra's actions.
ReplyDeleteExcellent six
ReplyDeleteThis wedding is turning into the wedding from hell.
ReplyDeleteLoving these snippets. But I agree, Lambra should be screaming, pummeling someone, doing more than looking, especially if we're in her POV.
ReplyDeleteLove each snippet. Almost feel as if I'm seeing it too :-)
ReplyDeleteStrong on description! One oddball wedding!
ReplyDeleteNicely done! :D
ReplyDeleteI've been to some unusual weddings but this one tops them all! Lots of action.
ReplyDeleteOh my. It just keeps getting better and better. Fantastic action!
ReplyDeleteWorst. Family. Gathering. Ever. *grin*
ReplyDelete~Xakara
A Way To A Dragon's Heart 6SS
Did he just attack someone with a bird? That was awesome.
ReplyDeleteThis is one wedding the guests will never forget. Crazy town!! lol!
ReplyDeleteThis certainly beats an ordinary fist fight at a wedding LOL
ReplyDeleteWow. If they had a wedding planner, she'd probably killed herself by now.
ReplyDeleteFab imagery, great six! :)
ReplyDeleteI love the underlying threat in the opening lines. For an instant it sounds like he's begging, and then you realize he isn't.
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