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In honor of the imminent meeting of the St. Helens Secret Society of Literary Divas (Book Club), this excerpt comes from my Tree/House, page 95 of the print edition. Here, Emma, the protagonist, is dreaming she's on top of a rocky cliff on which hundreds of putrefying bodies are waiting to die. She herself has rotted to the point of missing her right arm and both legs. It's a positive image, really!
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He replied before she asked, "To die, you must lie perfectly still, but it's hard. I've been trying for years."
"But Emma, why do you want to die?" asked a young woman in the earliest stages of putrefaction. "You have so much going for you."
Emma wondered what she had that they didn't. Most of them still had all their limbs at least.
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Um, gross. Yet, very interesting. Great job.
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ReplyDeleteSo much going for you? Um, it's a bit difficult to get going without your legs!
ReplyDeleteWell, I'm sure this will make her think about her life. She obviously has a lot of time.
ReplyDeleteInteresting six!
Pippa Jay, you seem to understand Emma's point of view perfectly! Thanks, everybody!!
ReplyDeleteYikes, what a dream! I hope it's just that! Great six!
ReplyDeleteCreepy, yet intriguing.
ReplyDeleteGlad it's just a dream--but it's vivid and disturbing and provocative.
ReplyDeleteGreat six!
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Wow, I'd be wanting to wake up and move all my limbs. What a unique concept!
ReplyDeleteIntriguing. Glad it's just a dream also. Looking forward to reading more about the positive side of this. :)
ReplyDeletePoignantly sad
ReplyDelete"Most of them had their limbs..."
ReplyDeleteReally? I'm hooked! great work.
Oh my God! What is going on with them? You sure sparked my curiosity with this 6!
ReplyDeleteI'm with J.C.!
ReplyDeleteOh, that is good!
ReplyDeleteWow! This leaves so many questions unanswered. Great job.
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