* * *
Doña Lambra woke to the brightness of the tent with a bitter taste in her mouth and dried tears crusting her eyes. She rolled over and saw a figure moving about in silence.
“Justa?” she croaked.
Ruy Blásquez moved next to the bedstead, nearly thrusting his bandaged nose in her face. “It is I, my dear wife.”
“Bring Justa.” * * *
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So much turmoil and drama in this story...
ReplyDeleteI agree with Zee. So much going on! :-)
ReplyDeletevery compelling---makes me want more
ReplyDeleteThe opening makes me sympathetic with her right away. Well written!
ReplyDeleteAn intriguing six! :)
ReplyDeleteI second Patricia's comment. Very well written, with no unnecessary words. Great six, Jessica.
ReplyDeleteLove this story!
ReplyDeletePoor Dona Lambra! She is NOT a happy camper. I assume Ruy has a bandaged nose from the fight? The question I have is: Is Ruy the hero or the villain in the plot? Can't wait to see what happens next.
ReplyDeleteThis is such a crazy wonderful story! Now what's going to happen? Such hot tempers...
ReplyDeleteI feel so sorry for Dona Lambra! Not a very happy beginning to a marriage as this scene depicts. Wonderful writing, Jessica.
ReplyDeleteA compelling six!
ReplyDeleteOh, I've missed this story! Looking forward to reading more.
ReplyDeleteNo honeymoon here, a rough way to start a marriage--suspenseful six!
ReplyDeleteI feel sorry for her too. What a wedding and now no honeymoon. Definitely looking forward to more!
ReplyDeleteWow, great story! Fab six :)
ReplyDeleteLove this story. Can't wait to read the whole thing.
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